excellent audio book really enjoyed it

amazing and enthralling and exciting great detail but keeps you guessing whats really happening. off too buy book.2.pxx

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wow what a great book

great storyline funny in parts looking forward to the next audiobook very excited to see what happens next

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very good book

only took me two days to get through, not many books have got me that hooked before. I can recomend it a 100%. the narrator did a amazing job. give it a chance you won't be disappointed

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Excellent

Takes a big dip in the story with about 3 hours to go but does recover quite quickly. Only reason for not getting 5 stars. Loved it, got some real armada/rp1 vibes from it!

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very good book can't wait for book 2

Very good book interesting way of merging future tech with game element. only bad point was stat points not eplaind fully made them seem redundant or space filler, but narrator was good in he rushed over them.

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Amazing

The story kept me listening and wanting to know more if you like scifi with a great mix of detail and character make up this is definitely worth the listen

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Good story, far far too many stats

I enjoyed the story for the most part. a bit of a cross over of litrpg genres with the MCs mind being transferred to a body on another planet where there is a game like system. some interesting twists on a popular theme, but far far too many stats. I almost gave up on the book so many times during the random readings overly detailed character sheets that added nothing to the story! I won't be buying the next book because of the stats.

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An emotional rollercoaster

When the second chapter made me tear up I knew this was going to be a good one.
The story is solid, the pacing is spot on and the characters are likeable. Some of the interactions between the characters are hilarious.
It's refreshing to read a story that doesn't shy away from emotions.

The only thing that felt a bit off for me were the mechanics. The way some skills work doesn't always makes sense. Nothing major and definitely not a deal-breaker. All in all its a great book.

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A very good complex story

There is a real depth to this story, that can only get better with future books in the series. A really good performance by Neil as usual. Overall very good and looking forward to book 2.

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The Story of "and now for a random twist"

The story started out great. Nice setting - I actually had feelings for the main character getting the short end of the stick.

Then we touch down into the meat of the world, which seems a little thin, but that'll get topped up later, sort of, a bit, in future books, I assume.

A few twists and chance encounters later, we've got a little action on the go, I can accept them so far, they're interesting and draw the story on.

But with another twist and chance encounter later things are getting strange, why did that happen? who are these guys? a little bit of exposition later and then another twist and another along with a rug pull or two and I've lost who's allied to who, why people are doing what they are doing with/to the MC and the story feels like it is missing swathes of the plot which would allow you to see why it's gone in the direction it has.

Then people are sacrificing themselves for what seems to be giggles, that I'm sure they will explain later, but a touch of common sense would tell you it was unnecessary other than: PLOT DEMANDS BIG FIGHT NOW and the MC can't have too much help for it...

I've read in other reviews the book finishes strong, but I wouldn't know, I've dropped it with 4 hours to go.

If you want action with just a hint of a potential good plot, this book may serve, but I'd take less action for more plot any day of the week. It's a shame because it seemed like a juicy universe.

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