The Arabic sounds like gibberish!

This story is beautiful and compelling, and the performance is lovely …until any Arabic is spoken! Arabic is an actual language, spoken by actual people. This performance reduces it to utter gibberish, a jumble of squashed syllables. The narrator mispronounces letters and words and gets the intonation all wrong. For example, routine greetings are turned into slightly hysterical wails because they include the word Allah (God). It’s quite ridiculous. It’s a shame because the pronunciation significantly changes the mood and intention of the passages that contain Arabic (and there are quite a few of them).

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One of my favourite writers

I adore this novel, which is so accomplished. Absolutely superb characterisation and settings, packed with history, doesn’t pander to the English reader. The Arabic pronunciation is… fragile.

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Arab history

This novel made me realise how little I knew about the history of the region. Beautifully written.

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moving and touching, engaging a history and love.

loved it, the performance was very successful and emotional where it should. thanks Fiona 💚

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Hooray for dialectical texturing of our oast

Brilliant, beautiful hopeful and inspiring: let there be as many Parisians as there are countries in our unexplored world! Yay!

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Full of detail but overly long

This is an accomplished first novel and deserves praise for its beautiful prose and careful plotting. But it was far too long in my opinion and would have benefitted from some skilful editing. The first section in particular could have been much shorter with no overall dilution of the backstory. That first section could almost have been a novel in itself.

The Parisian of the title is a young Palestinian man who is sent by his merchant father to Istanbul and then to France for a gentleman’s education. In France he meets a young woman who becomes his first and perhaps greatest love. But she spurns him and he flees to Paris where he becomes involved in Middle Eastern politics at a time (post First World War) when Britain and France are seeking to carve up the region between them.

On his return to Palestine his father forces him to make life choices which puzzle him; he marries a local girl from a wealthy, well-respected family and joins his father’s business. But during the ensuing years life deals him many a bad card and he discovers his father has betrayed him on more than one occasion. Ultimately this leads to a complete collapse in his life at a time when friends and family are also becoming involved in the armed struggle against the British Empire. When his closest cousin is killed he discovers that a French priest, whom he considered a friend, has also betrayed him.

This story is packed with interesting detail, almost too much detail, and this contributed to the novel being overly long. The narration was pleasant and easy to listen to.

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An accomplished first novel

This novel was written in a style reminiscent of 19th century French realist writers: massive attention to realistic detail and just occasionally a little too informative. It is the story of a young bourgeois Palestinian's experiences in France and how these experiences colour the rest of his life.The book spans twenty years and is set iinitially in Paris and later in Nablus against the backdrop of the Palestinian struggle for independence.
Any-one interested in the history of Palestine under the Ottomans and the beginnings of Zionism will find the historic detail interesting even if Hammad does occasionally veer off at a tangent to include historical events.
Regrettably the narration when the novel moved to Nablus was problematic for me. Fiona Button has a lovely French accent and she reads English with emotion and warmth but her pronunciation of even the names of characters and simple greetings in Arabic was excrutiatingly bad ,to such an extent that I lost the thread of the story on a couple of occasions. It is unforgivable not to be able to pronounce Ahmed, Faisal or Mahmoud correctly, or to call a male character Adèle (Adel). Perhaps it might have been better to use a narrator with a knowledge of Arabic as the dialogue is peppered with Arabic phrases?
This is a long novel, and should possibly have been pruned a little by the editor, but it was definitely worth my time.

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Didn’t move me

I really want to like this novel but I just can’t get inside it. The reading doesn’t help - very flat, only two voices for characters and very similar intonation, dodgy Arabic pronunciation. Occasionally things pick up when the politics/history starts happening, but I find this always peters out in the characters’ lack of personality. [SPOILER: not even the gun smuggling nuns are exciting!]

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Story of 2 halves

Thoroughly enjoyed the first half, full of rich characters which really evoked a time and a place.
Second half was slower and lot more detail of wars and politics of the time. I was left disappointed by the confusing plot and didn’t manage to listen right to the end.

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What a beautiful book

Such exquisite writing - and so rich in depth and detail while carrying you along, craving the next detail about each character. Stunning.

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