great setting and great narration

first off, I love the premise and the main characters. they all have a unique feeling to them and the background management SIM elements are all interesting. I hope they get expanded on a bit more in the sequel as building stuff for yourself Vs using the system is never really touched on.

there were a couple of irritations - continuity points mostly. first off he lets a bandit go and then the very next line he is about to interrogate him; there's a comment about being sabotaged in the tavern but that never happens. a gorl is named before she introduced herself; a fights pacing is thrown off as you're not sure who is where in the scene; and an elf who is described IN DETAIL is then referred to as a dwarf a moment later.

the pacing makes this feel a little like the intro to a larger book but overall it does a good job of setting the scene of the world. I would love to see some more delving into his powers, what they mean, seeing how he (and the gorls( develop and hone their skills more than just having an innate grasp.

the narrators do an amazing job and the characters all sound alive and unique, the spicy scenes are great and I look forward to seeing this world expand and go into more depth!

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