Not Good

The author writes in a very stereotypically offensive way when describing different cultures and people. I personally found it extremely offensive and couldn't take it anymore after almost 5 hours of offensive writing. The story has a lot of plot holes and various things just don't make sense. For ex, a woman was murdered in a highly secure secret government location underground, with camera's everywhere. However not only was there no concern about a member of their secret team being murdered, there was no mention of an investigation and it had no affect on their newly formed, extremely important secret mission, which includes Ana the telepath who is a high target. It's really ridiculous and unrealistic. How are they going to stop terrorists if they can't even find out who the murderer was in their own building?

The way it is written is in a very drawn out, over-explained, micro-managed way and takes way to long to get to different stages of the story, because of these long unnecessary descriptions. More editing would have been of value here. The narrators voice is too 'sweet' for this type of book and does not fit the action, violence and various characters he portrays. He is not really able to adapt his voice for the various characters which are spoken mostly in the same voice. There are also some issue's with the narrator repeating sentences he's already said which should have been edited out.

I was given this book for free of my own choosing and have voluntarily left this review.

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