Sucked me in with interest and left me feeling empty- possible spoilers!!!

These books started off so well, it peaked my interest and I left me looking forward to the next book. I felt (If possible) there was too much needless sex and not enough story line. After the big reveal in later books, I was kind of waiting for more but never got it. I felt there should have been more to come.

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wow second book in and the storyline is so good.

what can I say it's an awesome storyline. I normally go for the more explicit paranormal romance stories but even thought this is gentle within the romance side of things I really love it and start on book 3 now 😊 well done to all involved 👏

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Infuriating may be spoilers

I thought the first book was bad but wanted to give the second book a try to see if anything had change and… no it just got worse.
The whole book was infuriating the main female character forgives too much
One of her “men” kisses someone else and another has his ex girlfriend living with them and she works for him too
he flirts with her at one point while the main female character was in the same room… and the main female character finally has a backbone, and stands up to him, but then turns around and apologises after…. When I listen to that Bit I was like 😤 are you serious!!!! I don’t mind submissive books but flirting/cheating even if it’s a kiss out side of the main characters it’s still cheating to me but the her “men”say it’s a
“a simple mistake”…. I will no longer be listen to this series

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Still no plot... or character development...

I've loved other of Albany Walker's books... so I was hoping that the first book of this series was just a fluke and this would get better. It doesn't. With 1 hour to go in this book. I DNF it. I've now wasted like 15 hours on this series and I realized that my time could be better used relistening to something I enjoyed rather than forcing myself through this.

Characters:
Laura still apologizes for EVERYTHING. She has no personality besides doormat and none of the characters have any backstory. Do whatever the guys say, freak out internally, then do nothing, absolutely NOTHING except what the guys want. The guys don't really have any consistent personality. Laura has NO female friends. Heck, that old test to decide if something is worth watching/reading/listening to? "...has to have at least two women in it, who talk to each other, about something other than a man." Laura just exists as a toy to these guys, while pretending that the story is about her. It's sad and depressing.

Steam/Chemistry:
There's no steam unless you count an occasional kiss and then freaking out about said kiss like a child in middle school rather than a 17 year old. The chemistry seems forced with no buildup.

Plot:
The main plot is 'we don't talk about anything, this causes problems, which we will continue to not talk about.' No known enemy or problem to solve outside of their non-existent relationship.

Performance:
Even our poor narrator sounds bored with this book.

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